i using article rewriter... please take a look original and not original

[marki8]

Thanks open this thread

i would like to know what you think about this article :-

* Original Article

Advertising for free seems like an impossible thing when heard. But there are several ways by which the cost of advertisement can be conserved, with the help of some imagination and creativity.

A business wanting to advertise, can write articles related to their field of expertise that can be submitted to media and publications having interest in that particular field. The advertising article can have information about the company and dealership opportunity. Due to the rise in Internet users and websites, new websites have sprung up which offer free services. Articles can be written for these websites and they can be broadcasted for free, which will be viewed by hundreds of people everyday.

* Rewrite Article

Advertising for free seems like an impossible thing when heard. But beside the point are several ways by to which the compute of advertisement can be conserved, with the steer of unfrequent imagination and creativity.

A business wanting to advertise, can write manufactures related to their outing of expertise that can be submitted to media and publications having interest in seeing that particular field. The advertising indictment can have information about the company and dealership opportunity. Due to the rise in Internet users and websites, new websites go at* sprung up which offer extramarital sex services. Articles can be written for these websites and they can be broadcasted for free, in which will be viewed by bests of people everyday.

What you think? Rewrite article is same meaning with original article or not?

please help, i not good in english, so i need your help

thanks

[snarke]

The first one is much better. I know it might not have been your intention but thanks for providing a living example of just how NOT effective it is to use an article rewriter/spinner! :)

[EGS]

Nah that's BS. The first sentence is plagiarized.
Do it manually.

[Trusted Writer]

People tend to believe that rewriting an article is as easy as a piece of cake but nonetheless, it is harder than write an original article if you are heading towards quality.

Even worst, rewriting is often paid cheaper than writing original content.

[marki8]

huuhuhu...

sorry i not good in writing, also in english to....

now i need to hire article writer.... but i have a lot PLR article....

[Trusted Writer]

No need to feel sorry, you are just learning and remember that practice makes master ;)

[DeniseJ]

Did anyone even catch the line in the second article about "extramarital sex services?" There's NOTHING in the first article that would even make this re-written line make sense.

As the first commenter mentioned, thank you for providing the perfect example of why article re-writers are worthless pieces of junk.

It's terrible, it doesn't make sense and no one would read that garbage if you paid them. Article spinners are not worth it; pay someone to write the article for you. You'll have a better chance of it making sense that way!

[dfourss]

huuhuhu...

sorry i not good in writing, also in english to....

now i need to hire article writer.... but i have a lot PLR article....

Yes, you may have trouble with English, and, yes, the rewrite is NOT good. But I'm having trouble with your abbreviations...what is PLR article?

[harvester]

Advertising for free seems like an impossible thing when heard.
Looks to me as if a human might be needed here, to give it that little extra something - readability for example.
I could suggest an alternative, in fact I've just written a couple of alternatives. But I've deleted them. Why should I help someone who is determined to avoid paying a writer a realistic fee for writing good English?
In my view it's time freelance writers started to protect their interests rather than `being helpful' to people who are trying to steal their income from them.
The OP is obviously from a non-English-speaking country. Do you imagine that he would try to help you, if you tried to start a business in his country that threatened his income? Of course he wouldn't.

[Germz]

Your article writer script was drunk when he wrote that.

Did anyone even catch the line in the second article about "extramarital sex services?" There's NOTHING in the first article that would even make this re-written line make sense.

LMAO!!! See what I mean? Drunk.

[bluecape]

i suggest you spend your $ on hiring a human writer, buddy.

[jhmattern]

The first is awful. The second is crap. Nuff said.

[Seymour Cash]

Did anyone even catch the line in the second article about "extramarital sex services?" There's NOTHING in the first article that would even make this re-written line make sense.

Many "plr rewriters" will sneak in their own links within an article. I would guess that is the case here.

I don't need to add that both articles r crap do i?:D

[Obelia]

The first is awful, and the second is nonsense as well as awful.

I've come across the results of article re-writers before, and I can usually tell by the first or second sentence that this has been used. To any native English speaker it stands out like a hippo trying to do ballet.

[marki8]

thanks because reply this thread...

and it's give me a lot of experience :)

PLR Article :- private label rights

[PaidReviewz]

try to buy original article, believe me, you will get more, like PageRank, SERP and anything

[Malcom David]

I feel you should look for a better writer as they are quite common

[marki8]

try to buy original article, believe me, you will get more, like PageRank, SERP and anything

yes, now i hire someone to do that...

I feel you should look for a better writer as they are quite common

the article that i post here is not from writer made, but it from re-writer software :(...

p/s : i spend $20 to buy that software :(

[jhmattern]

Well, investment aside, at least you were smart enough to ask for honest feedback before continuing to use poor quality content. So just take it as a lesson learned. :)

[marki8]

yes thank @jhmattern

now i try to re-write by my self using dictionary thesaurus.... what you think about this idea?

still have small problem such grammar.... :)

but i will try, do not give up and still need to learn (read more english article)

[sheilasultani]

At first I thought the 1st paragraph was the rewrite because it was so awful - and then I read the second and COULD NOT STOP LAUGHING -

If English was not my first language I would definitely hire someone to write for me, or at least an editor.

[latoya]

I don't even consider the second article as being rewritten. Replacing a few words here and there is not rewriting an article. That said, only a human can do a good job at rewriting - a human who's NOT using software.

I agree with Trusted_Writer, rewriting is often more work than writing an original article and perhaps should pay more instead of less, especially when you're expected to turn a crap article into a quality one.

[Marketeador]

Article rewriter software sucks.

I have tried many options to see what kind of results they brought and they always seemed to end up giving these weird sounding phrases. If you put yourself in the reader's place, the low quality is pretty evident. I's prefer human rewriting, in the end it really shows.

[marki8]

hei thanks all cause give your feedback...

i know some people don't like rewriter software, :)

now i will try my self...

[TheAverageJoe]

Honestly, I think it'd be well worth your money to hire someone to do it for you.

[Ganceann]

hei thanks all cause give your feedback...

i know some people don't like rewriter software, :)

now i will try my self...

Good luck with this project, but if you are planning on rewriting PLR articles yourself and using a thesaurus for synonym replacement, it will not be much better than the example your posted (as most article rewriting software attempts to do the same thing).

The best thing would be to have someone with a good grasp of English to rewrite the PLR articles for you - although this will have a cost attached to it that may be beyond your current budget, the quality of work should be much higher.

On the other hand, if you are creating original content from scratch in your own words, it may be beneficial to have a native English speaker proofread the work after you have created it.

[marketjunction]

The first is awful. The second is crap. Nuff said.

This is what I love about you. ;)