Review My GF Squidoo Lens!

[brushfire55]

Hey Guys,

I would like some feedbacks or comments for my Squidoo Lens.

Thanks.

Here is the link:

http://www.squidoo.com/kyanisuccess

[Cryogenius]

I had a look, and I was pleasantly surprised. You have a nice balance of text, pictures and products, and the poll and guest book is a great way to include the readers in the content. Nicely done.

If you (or your GF) were to post on the SquidU.com forum (http://www.squidu.com/forum/), you'll be able to get some more feedback.

[fifthcore]

Under "Hi, I'm Kyani_Success" then you click "more" and it shows like 5 more words. That was kind of annoying you might want to fix that. Overall I really like the design. The Google ad on the right looks a little out of place, but not a huge deal.

[deadmediafm]

good writing! nice lens anyway

[xcelent88]

Very good writing...Good work :)

[NickG7]

Lens seems good; all that you could do to improve it would be add more content.