How is this EmaiL Script Website? PLEASE TELL . . .

[superstan]

hello all beautiful people at DP

can you please take time and

visit our site: www.jilmail.com (http://www.jilmail.com)and tell me how is it.

It has made great sales till now and I'd like to know
your comments, suggesstions, script review anything you have.

even orders :p

Thankz in Advance !

Stay Happy.

[HDG]

Positives:

I understand what the product is about.


Suggestions for improvement:

The design overall seems pretty low-rent. You didn't have a web designer right? If you did get rid of them.
The stock photo of a women is meaningless and doesn't fit with your site.
The yellow "sale-tag" sticker seems tacky
The top of the site is mostly empty white space, that's prime real estate to make use of
The body text is too small

[superstan]

thank you for your kind reply
i will surely work on it !