I need help. Please review my site

[indyonline]

Hello. I'm building an Indianapolis city guide and I can not get any page rank for nothing. Would somebody please look at my site and let me know if there are any obvious errors, or things I need to do. Thanks in advance.
www.indyonline.com

[Tylnd]

Hi indyonline,

I did a quick look at your site. It seems that the most prevalent keyword on your site is "indianapolis." This may be a hard keyword to rank for. Have you tried less competitive keywords?

I am sending you some related keywords that are less competitive. They all have a KEI of 300 on Google, Yahoo, and MSN.

Good luck.

[indyonline]

Thank you. I will review the keywords. Thank you for your time and advice.

[indyonline]

excellent thank you. I reviewed the keywords, there great. I really think they will help. Thanks again.