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craftsman
Sep 12th 2007, 8:01 am
Hello all!

What a long process it's been creating this. Here it is in a new version... time to stop working on it for a while and start drumming up clients I think!

Anyway, I *very much* appreciate any opinion or thoughts you care to share:

www.scottjanes.com

Best Regards & Best Luck to You!
Scott

PS: The Digitalpoint forum says "live links" are not available to me yet... please copy and paste the address into your browser's address bar. Thank you!

Getagrip
Sep 30th 2007, 8:11 pm
Two things that stood out to me:

1. I didn't like the lavender color border.

2. Are you selling an info product or just doing consulting? If you are selling an info product, I'd give the option for visitors to buy, rather than "just" receive a free consultation.