Please review my site

[supercops]

Please review my websites and also how can i improve them so that i can get some good rankings. The sites are on my signatures. Honest answers wanted . iwill be happy to learn more if i am doing something wrong

thanks

[zehlendorf]

The India site is quite interesting. Aside from a few grammar mistakes the text looks fine. I'm not sure what keyword you're trying for though. Also, the layout looks like a blog. Very easy to navigate.