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EGS
May 12th 2007, 2:46 pm
Hi.

Please take the time to review a Pontiac Grand Am (http://www.grandayum.com) site. I have taken quite a bit of time to write the content of the site. The site is not done yet, as I have a lot more to write about.

I already know the design is simple, so please review my layout structure, domain name, and content.

Thanks for taking the time to review this Grand Am (http://www.grandayum.com) site. I look forward to reading your review. :)

Green rep will be also added to you. ^_^

8everything
May 12th 2007, 5:31 pm
May place an actually header on the upper area of the layout with photographs of pontiacs?

EGS
May 12th 2007, 5:32 pm
May place an actually header on the upper area of the layout with photographs of pontiacs?
I am no good at graphics.. :o

8everything
May 12th 2007, 5:42 pm
I am no good at graphics.. :o

Do you have photoshop? Just blend them together :p no drawing or anything!

EGS
May 12th 2007, 5:47 pm
Do you have photoshop? Just blend them together :p no drawing or anything!
I have PhotoShop but I don't know how to do all that..

Bender
May 12th 2007, 5:49 pm
I have PhotoShop but I don't know how to do all that..

Look at her "Location"...:)

8everything
May 12th 2007, 5:53 pm
I have PhotoShop but I don't know how to do all that..

Use the eraser tool.. set it to an airbrush :D and just delete the edges, move the pics together. It's easy, really :p

EGS
May 12th 2007, 5:56 pm
Use the eraser tool.. set it to an airbrush :D and just delete the edges, move the pics together. It's easy, really :p
F' that. I don't have the time to learn that crap. I'm no good anyway.

8everything
May 12th 2007, 5:59 pm
F' that. I don't have the time to learn that crap. I'm no good anyway.

Lol okay, it's not a huge biggy :p content is key!!!

EGS
May 12th 2007, 6:24 pm
Lol okay, it's not a huge biggy :p content is key!!!
You could have offered to do it for me.. :rolleyes:

catyack
May 12th 2007, 7:59 pm
I think the domain name is really bad or maybe I just don't understand it, is it supposed to mean something? How would one pronounce that?

The font is really hard on the eyes, maybe use verdana or something a little lighter.

Not a lot of content, it seems like you were rushed while typing out the content, but nothing really interesting in the content makes me want to click the links to the products. I tried to follow some of the links, but they don't take you to the right section in the store. For example the ones under the cat-back just take you to a store, that's just going to upset visitors and they will leave.

Picture size is too big, those pictures are only 640X480 could be a third the size they are and look just as good. Anyone on dial up or slow dsl is going to be waiting forever to view them. Maybe invest in PhotoShop or use some free photo editing program to fix them up.

none of the links work under the vids section either.

trichnosis
May 13th 2007, 5:19 pm
my suggests are below

* making a logo for your site
* your header is very plain .in fact i did not see any header on your site:) you can make a header which includes a pontiac picture.

note: off topic but i loved your adsense placement on the left side :D

xxsAm
May 13th 2007, 8:01 pm
You need a good header image/logo and you should be all set.

Ormus
May 13th 2007, 10:48 pm
You need more content, 1 page website... thumbs down

EGS
May 14th 2007, 5:53 am
You need more content, 1 page website... thumbs down
It is not a 1-page website. :confused:

dan4304
May 14th 2007, 7:13 am
I noticed you only have adsense in the menu of the website. If you want to raise your click-thru rates you will want to blends ads througout your content in the main part of your pages.


Dan