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androide
Mar 26th 2007, 5:55 am
Hello,

this is my website: www.moneyreview.org

I was wondering if you could do a review of it or simply say what you think about it.

thanks to all!

indexmaster
Mar 26th 2007, 10:46 am
should hide the affiliate code.. i could see it easily....the design is alright.. hey can you review mysite indexspot.com

androide
Mar 26th 2007, 11:37 am
ok thanks..

on your site everything is good...


the only thing if I were you i will add a link to the image of the search engine on the homepage...

Michelangelo
Mar 27th 2007, 2:25 am
I would recommand you to replace the cash image in the header. People are bored to see loads of cash. Believe me. I also don't like the font style of the text, just below the header image. But your color scheme is great.

8everything
Mar 27th 2007, 7:06 am
The blue and red font looks really messy, I would replace it with a cleaner script font.

androide
Mar 27th 2007, 8:58 am
sidfromla: thanks.


indexmaster: affiliate link now is hidden.

8everything: I have cut the red font under the title. In your opinion i have to let it how is now or i have to add anything?


Michelangelo: thanks for your suggestion. What image can i insert without the "cash" image?



Thanks all for your suggestions.

Michelangelo
Mar 27th 2007, 10:41 am
You may use portraits of business (wo)men or an image of a home office.

harishmg
Mar 27th 2007, 10:53 am
money is the ultimate thing dude...whcih can fetch u hits.....hits inturn fetch u money.....;)

grg
Mar 27th 2007, 11:05 am
Do you use default/gray border around? I highly advice to change it to any other colour, even white.

androide
Mar 27th 2007, 1:16 pm
Michelangelo: thanks.. I will do it..


harishmg: I think that you are right, but what can i promote on my website to have a lot of target hits?

grg: I don't use the default color on target bgcolour. The colour is pink; do you think anyways that is better white as color?

Thanks All.

SEOscotland.co.uk
Mar 27th 2007, 2:25 pm
The "handwritten font" doesn't look great, try another one.

Put your "handwritten" part in speech marks, it's been shown to increase "believeability" in direct response type ads. Red is also a better colour for attention grabbing headlines.

plot
Mar 27th 2007, 2:29 pm
Take out the loads of cash logo..looks like another scam :)

espmartin
Mar 27th 2007, 5:37 pm
Hello,

I tend to agree with others that the site is very spammy looking. I have to admit
that I began to think of the site as a Trojan horse depot :(

Anyway, I know I can trust you, so I stayed and checked your HTML.

You have many, many, many validation errors:

COPT/PASTE code below into your browser:
http://www.htmlhelp.com/cgi-bin/validate.cgi?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.moneyreview.org%2F&warnings=yes&spider=yes&hidevalid=yes

I can sure help you with those errors if you like!

Martin E.

androide
Mar 28th 2007, 10:14 am
Hello,

I tend to agree with others that the site is very spammy looking. I have to admit
that I began to think of the site as a Trojan horse depot :(



My site spammy looking? trojan horse depot?


I agree anything of what you said.



Please

be carfull when you write this word.

espmartin
Mar 28th 2007, 10:21 am
Yes, thinking about it, I shouldn't label anyone's legit site as such. MyBad!

It did remind me of one, but I'll retract it from the post. I know your's is NOT.

:o

I guess I can't edit a day old post!

Anyway, good luck with the site!

weknowtheworld
Mar 28th 2007, 10:47 am
My viewpoint is the first webpage is very big to scroll down... please reduce if possible.

androide
Mar 29th 2007, 9:46 am
The "handwritten font" doesn't look great, try another one.

Put your "handwritten" part in speech marks, it's been shown to increase "believeability" in direct response type ads. Red is also a better colour for attention grabbing headlines.

Hello,

now i have done it: you can check go to

www.moneyreview.org for the old page;
www.moneyreview.org/index2.html for the new page;


Let me know, for you what is best.

Take out the loads of cash logo..looks like another scam

I didn't find any image better of that...or i find it i violate the copyright pasting on my site.
Have you got one your image that can be pasted here? :D

webnowtheworld: Thanks for your suggestion, i will do it asap.

karencaul
Mar 29th 2007, 10:24 am
simple,but powful

androide
Mar 29th 2007, 10:35 am
Hello Karencaul!

What is best for you:
www.moneyreview.org (old page);
www.moneyreview.org/index2.html (new page)

?

Thanks