Sales Letter Critique for Information Product

[sebastya]

Hey Guys,

I need some help with my website, in particular the sales letter that I have up. I've only had around 120 visitors so far to the website with no CPC campaigns running atm, but I was hoping by now I would have made at least one sale.

Could anyone critique the sales letter, or anything else in general that will help?

URL is http://www.BeLikeRonaldinho.com

Thanks

[8everything]

I can critique on the design.. I think if you designed the site, it may help you! Especially to something that looks professional. Sales pages are tough, but a nice design would really help it.