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earnnetwealth
Jan 18th 2009, 9:52 am
I have seen enough of this web site to trust judgement.
Unlike most places it seems the people around here are pretty trustworthy.
I have had this new site which promotes my program on line for a few months now and response is pretty good.
Please let me know what you think.
http://www.earnnetwealth.com
Thanks In Advance.
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rcadble
Jan 18th 2009, 10:09 am
It's okay -- it kind of gives you that "infomercial at 5:00 AM" kind of vibe to it, I'm not really sure that's a good or bad thing.
One thing I would definitely make sure to do is look over the grammar, formatting, and writing. It looks quite unprofessional. Try not to randomly capitalize nouns, and when you make nouns plural, don't randomly use apostrophes. I think if it were in an organized, list-type format, it'd look much more professional and people would get less of that "cheap infomercial" vibe.
I'm not trying to be mean, I hope you find this criticism to be constructive.
earnnetwealth
Jan 18th 2009, 10:16 am
It's okay -- it kind of gives you that "infomercial at 5:00 AM" kind of vibe to it, I'm not really sure that's a good or bad thing.
One thing I would definitely make sure to do is look over the grammar, formatting, and writing. It looks quite unprofessional. Try not to randomly capitalize nouns, and when you make nouns plural, don't randomly use apostrophes. I think if it were in an organized, list-type format, it'd look much more professional and people would get less of that "cheap infomercial" vibe.
I'm not trying to be mean, I hope you find this criticism to be constructive.
This is exactly why I asked for a review.
I have a person that does this for me, and I will have her review it again.
This is an affiliate type site and was created with that feel in mind.
Thank you for your review.
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tihomir_wwf
Jan 18th 2009, 12:32 pm
well, I think it'll be better if all that information is organized in blog, otherwise the header is cool :)
anagfan
Jan 18th 2009, 7:19 pm
Header is really worth watching...
kingofsanda
Jan 19th 2009, 7:46 am
I am always skeptical whenever I see such a site, the design is not bad but I think
it would be great if you added some testimonials from some satisfied customers to
the page.
Terran
Jan 19th 2009, 10:57 am
Truth is, everytime i see a site like that (single page layout) i just wanna click back, or close my browser. I recommend revising your layout and making it more informational if you are seeking to gain ad revenue, and more products if you plan to generate sales.
webguy28
Jan 21st 2009, 1:33 pm
I would shy away from the one page design.
proberto
Jan 21st 2009, 4:33 pm
The header is great! But pay attetion to the content. Some issue to resolve there. Formatting and that kind of stuff.
Also in the Video section, the top image isn“t doing so well...
furious001
Jan 22nd 2009, 12:46 am
I think the site is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@2222
blackpaw
Jan 22nd 2009, 7:23 am
Site looks good - good luck with it, wouldn't change much.
One thing back in the day when I was in sales and did some IM like this every class or seminar I attended showed statistically that you should ask 3 times for the customer to buy I see only one, unless I missed them. Somewhere in your page I would add some join now statements.
Just a DP noob's humble opinion
knowledgeherald
Jan 22nd 2009, 8:49 am
you have chosen correct header for this site. The graphics that you have used is also appropriate. Carry on with your website. Best of luck.
Natadee
Jan 22nd 2009, 9:42 am
One page design is very difficult to attract customer nowadays. Try to make it as a site or blog. I think it will help you earn more money. You can use wordpress for creating site. It's very easy. You can download this for free at wordpress.org :)
bannerheaderdesigner
Jan 22nd 2009, 10:13 am
impressive header and cool site!!!
earnnetwealth
Jan 22nd 2009, 2:30 pm
impressive header and cool site!!!
Thanks for the comment.
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fedroza
Jan 22nd 2009, 2:51 pm
Your site very good and cool color
awcguy
Jan 30th 2009, 12:29 pm
Honestly and Constructive review
I skim websites that look like this now.. because all websites selling books look like this. I stop at the pictures.. If the pictures is a book.. I figured you were selling books. Your program behind the scenes is not OBVIOUS!
Take a screenshot of the program when you log in.. show that you are offering more then just books. For 49.95 poeple want a little hand holding .. Wealthyaffiliate waited years before they reached that price.. and they offer triple the services from a quick read.
3 points.
1. Initial review.. "Book selling website"
2. What am I getting behind the doors - not obvious
3. Are you offering a like service of that in your competitation? (what programs did you compare yours to when you created a price point)
Cheers to your success!
mrktjunior
Jan 30th 2009, 4:24 pm
I agree with awcguy. make it more realistic.
earnnetwealth
Feb 10th 2009, 3:57 pm
Thanks for the reviews.
I have made some changes to include adding a free section that although does not have everything the paid section offers gives a feel for the affiliate back area.
for convience the link again is http://www.earnnetwealth.com
Thanks,
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