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john14789
Nov 1st 2008, 12:59 am
Well here it is: http://www.freeamazonwebstore.com

Please tell me what to improve.

Thanks

SpectR
Nov 1st 2008, 3:52 am
Looks a bit spammy to me.
Too big and varigated fonts make bad impression in my opinion.
You could make a better header as well.

Jingletruck
Nov 1st 2008, 4:36 am
better header, neater and smaller font, this looks like one of those sites which screams scam

jitendra05
Nov 1st 2008, 4:55 am
Make some nice contents.

ri12ku2002
Nov 1st 2008, 5:14 am
need to change the design also need gud header. Font need little small and must hide the affiliate link there.

lycos
Nov 1st 2008, 7:58 am
Well looks like a typical sales page to me and after reading it, I think it should be convincing enough. Overall, I think it's ok.

iGlickStudio
Nov 1st 2008, 9:34 am
It looks a little cheap and a little spammy like SpectR said.

john14789
Nov 1st 2008, 11:25 am
It would be nice to just get some recommendations on how to improve the site instead of getting the same responses.

Any tips on how to improve the headers?

I'll improve the fonts.

john14789
Nov 2nd 2008, 7:09 am
Anybody have any other suggestions?

mrsun613
Nov 2nd 2008, 7:11 am
Seems very unorganized to me. I don't see any reason for those banners to be there, the entire landing page is a huge banner

john14789
Nov 2nd 2008, 7:20 am
So where do you propose I put my banners then?

Should I replace the top left side banner with a picture?

talking
Nov 2nd 2008, 11:38 am
yes i agree i would make it look more professional then it does right now. You will get more members to join and trust your site and that is what it is for to make you some money and people to use.

john14789
Nov 2nd 2008, 4:01 pm
How can I make it more professional?

Any ideas you would like to share with me. :)

I'm sorry but I'm all out of creative ideas because of all the work I've been doing.

johnab2112
Nov 2nd 2008, 8:32 pm
Make the fonts small. Because it is too big even at large resolution. Think about and test it at 800 X 600. The whole screen will be taken by the header only. On the other hand, large fonts take all the attention and visitors do not read the contents properly.

It also looks like a spam site.

redbean
Nov 3rd 2008, 12:48 am
I think the big fonts work well :)

Only thing I think needs improving is a) header/logo and b) make all the content into 1 column.

john14789
Nov 3rd 2008, 4:11 pm
I'll try smaller fonts for a week and see results. Ok so now that we have the font matter settled how do you guys suggest I improve the header? Should I pay someone to make a header?

I saw a bunch of people here who make headers. Can someone suggest me a good header designer.

moonwalker
Nov 3rd 2008, 4:19 pm
It also looks a bit spammy to me. I think it needs a nice header and a more attractive layout.

john14789
Nov 3rd 2008, 10:30 pm
Ok I just got done making improvements! Please check it out now and tell me if I need to improve anything else.

john14789
Nov 4th 2008, 12:17 pm
Anybody like or dislike the new improvements? :)

rsheth3
Nov 4th 2008, 11:28 pm
i agree with the posts up their but needs a better header

kas10900
Nov 5th 2008, 2:34 am
Needs some professional looking graphics, maybe have a look at some gurus sales pages to see the fonts and styles they use. The testimonials need to stand out more.

john14789
Nov 8th 2008, 1:56 pm
Ok, I made some final improvements to the website. Tell me if I need to improve anything please :)