Hallo Gurus! Please Comment My First Web Page!

[mvhomebusiness]

Hi!
My name is Martin Laanso and I have started affiliate business lately. My web page link: www.mycommissionblueprintstory.com
Any criticism is welcome!

[kingofsanda]

You should remove the drop shadow effect on the text in the header
of the site. You should make the text in the body of the document
smaller, it's a little too large.

[mvhomebusiness]

Thanks to kingofsanda! Please some more comments from other people as well!

[ozairkhan]

yeah martin good effort
i think u should improve it more

[mvhomebusiness]

Ok, tnx ozairkhan, but how?

[satdin]

Good starting indeed. Why you don't your site to Directories and Social Bookmarking sites. I think i will bring you lots of traffic. Let's try.

[mvhomebusiness]

Please contact me, satdin!

[jebradec]

Good website. I think dimmed quotes to the side perhaps highlighting certain things that the website is saying might be nice.

[mmcook1]

To me it looks like a splash page. Add more content.

[bobbym]

it is fine but if you really want to get cusmoter. you need more graphic on your site. it will more attract the visitor

[STAR Cruiser]

These sites can only be promoted by article submission. better target low traffic keywords..